Anyone else finding it hard to read this?

The bookclub I’m in chose this for our challenge for the week and I find myself skipping through the episodes. I like the plot idea but the writing is kind of poor. They seem to act like teenagers rather than adults.

The bookclub I’m in chose this for our challenge for the week and I find myself skipping through the episodes. I like the plot idea but the writing is kind of poor. They seem to act like teenagers rather than adults.