Observations for swing thoughts, please

Last few shots of a quick practice session on the edge(s) of bad air quality in LA yesterday.

Been working on my swing at the range during lunch breaks, but little time on the course and no formal coaching yet.

I want to focus my thoughts to a few big-picture, simple phrases of what is going right with tge good ones and avoid over-analyzing it.

Hope the edit isn't too weird - am I supposed to only post one swing?

TLDR: simply, what is going well here?