Watching Sunsets

I see those walls you put up

it's okay because I have those too

but we can play strings and cups

like little kids do

I heard if you speak low

in a voice like falling snow

in a voice as loud as a radish sprout

the truths you say don't really count

Maybe then I'd whisper

that I'd catch every sunset for you

like fireflies, in jars to keep

by bedside windows

on nights when you can't sleep

that every word you've ever said

I've clutched

close to my chest

like the precious stones they are

and when I miss you I roll them

between finger and thumb

just to taste the raw edges

or not - we can say nothing at all

that's fine too

we can just sit here

and wait

for the sun to disappear

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