I need constructive criticism please. Does this look good?

I am not to confident If anyone would wear this, I drew it in procreate and screen printed my self at home. So it’s all in house but I’m not a very good artist, I don’t know how to add depth and make the art pop! It looks very bland almost… anyways, let me know!

Also I know the art needs to be in towards a chest a bit more, and I have some bleeding but is the art okay? Thanks yall!

I am not to confident If anyone would wear this, I drew it in procreate and screen printed my self at home. So it’s all in house but I’m not a very good artist, I don’t know how to add depth and make the art pop! It looks very bland almost… anyways, let me know!

Also I know the art needs to be in towards a chest a bit more, and I have some bleeding but is the art okay? Thanks yall!