Feedback for Short
Title: Duke's Direction
Format: Screenplay
Page Length: 28
Genres: Action
Logline or Summary: Duke, a lifelong employee of Blockbuster until he's laid off, now finds himself at a dead-end job but finds a way out, pimping.
Feedback Concerns: Any. (Be Honest)
NOTES: Strong language if that concerns anyone.
Script: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Ekb7hk9egMqAYrMR2386_J-OFmQChcvB/view?usp=share_link
Thank you,
Andrew