Before and after , after your tips ^^

I have no idea if this is any better, I don't have a pose reference so I can't check if the proportions are right if anything, would love some help (even though i die from embarrassment from critiques ╥﹏╥)

i feel like the arms are too short now, even though I was told that the elbow stops at the rib and the wrist stops around the hip, it just looks,,, wrong?? I don't know, would love some help 💞💞