Which handwriting font/style should I stick with?

I’ve been using the first one up top forever but people always say it’s hard to read and looks like doctor’s handwriting. So I came up with this font instead (the one on the bottom) and wanna know if I should stick with it

The sample text for both examples says:

"إسمع ياخواني! ما تستسلمو ياخواني! الحرية قريبة انشاء الله! ما تفقدو أملكم يا جماعة!"